As we gradually shed the veil, as we bare ourselves through the word and glimpses of skin, as our desire collides, fuses, coincides, as our urgent, carnal passions threaten to swallow us both, as our need to merge and fuck and devour overtakes the rational mind, it is your longing to kiss me, caress me, savour me, to make love to me, soft and slow and lingering, that trembles this fair body, that sets the fevered ache, that carries my breath clear away.

  1. Osbasso 2010.08.29 3:04pm

    One of the finest single sentences I've read in a long time…

  2. The Muffin Fan 2010.08.29 4:54pm

    Blessed are the men who can evoke such a splendid response from The Enchantrix.

    I suspect your burning heart and insatiable lusts could be extraordinarily consuming to the recipient when they find focus upon someone.

  3. Green Eyed Frenchy 2010.08.30 8:32am

    I'm just nodding behing Os and Muffin Fan, oh yes, I can feel the fire of desire consuming an awe-struck lover! Sigh! Double sigh!

  4. stareintotheabyss 2010.08.30 3:20pm

    I don't know, CM, soft and slow and lingering might have to wait…

  5. southerngirl 2010.08.30 4:05pm

    I will certainly take that exquisite place of devouring over the rational mind, each and every time. Beautiful…

  6. Advizor 2010.08.30 5:39pm

    “threaten to swallow us both, as our need to merge and fuck and devour overtakes the rational mind, “

    what is it inside of us (no pun intended) that searches for that bond, that connection, the need to feel as one if only for a moment in the fevered night? You capture these sentiments without providing answers, the eternal questions are asked, leaving us longing.

  7. Dewey's System 2010.08.31 4:15am

    It might carry your breath away, but I read this and can not find my breath. Your words take it away leaving me wanting, wanting so much more than just to breathe.

  8. Cheeky Minx 2010.08.31 10:33am

    Os: I can't tell you how much that means to me…

    Muffin: Thank you! And surely, we all crave the all-consuming experience, at least once in a while? I most certainly do, particularly with the man who courts and inspires both the darkness and light of my desire.

    Frenchy: Thank you so much, lovely. I'm rather hoping he feels the same way…

    KJK: Oh my… Is that right?

    SG: I second that, gorgeous. Every single time. And thank you…

    Advizor: While I'm unsure of the origin of that need, I suspect it is the very thing that binds us all together. And I'm happy this piece not only captures my longing but also leaves you feeling a little of it…

    Dewberry: To hear this piece leaves you wanting and desiring more than merely breath (even as you are breathless), is the highest praise…